Monday, 6 September 2021

Why dogs are better then cats

 

I enjoyed doing my self assesment.
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  1. Sarah Aperahama7 September 2021 at 10:13

    Kia Ora Yumi,
    Well done on following the success criteria for structuring your writing correctly. Can you please go back and re read your sentences out aloud. There are some grammatical errors that interrupt the flow such as - They can save people from drowning, willing to learn commands. instead of a comma put and.
    Ma te wa
    Mrs Aperahama

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